What is the best invention of last 100 years, computer, antibiotics, airplane, and explain why?
It is argued to find the humans' best product in the last century whether it is machines, flights or antibiotic medicines. This essay agrees that computers are the best invention. Firstly, this essay will explain all three inventions and secondly, it will discuss how computers have an upper hand in terms of benefits over the other inventions.
To commence with antibiotics, this product is an excellent outcome of human research as it is imperative to have a medicine that can heal the injuries and diseases rapidly. Airplanes have always played a key role when it comes to the quickest mode of transport. Although these two inventions have their own benefits, human life never becomes void without them as there are always replacements available. For instance, a recent study conducted by Melbourne University found that still, more than 70% of people do not tend to use antibiotics unless it is inevitable.
Although the above products are great ones of human invention, certainly they can't beat the advantages of computers. Machines with artificial intelligence can almost perform whatever a human can perform. These devices have reduced a lot of manual and tedious jobs and automated them. In the recent article published in The New York Times stated that the intelligence has been build enough to perform critical surgeries, such as open heart surgery, on humans by machines. Computers are even playing a significant role in producing antibiotics and flight operations as well.
In conclusion, although medicines and flights have their own importance, certainly they can not write-off the advantages of computers that are part of human life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'humans the best'.
Suggestion: humans the best
It is argued to find the humans best product in the last century whether it ...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a replacement' or simply 'replacements'?
Suggestion: a replacement; replacements
...e void without them as there are always a replacements available. For instance, a recent stud...
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Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... them as there are always a replacements available. For instance, a recent study ...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ones of human invention, certainly they cant beat the advantages of computers. Machi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22932330827 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82042342327 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616541353383 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1104982642 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0636295867226 0.242375264174 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234107550883 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326266205603 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0401118414627 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504529015716 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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