With the advent of Internet age, increasing number of workers are doing their jobs from home and communicating with their office through Internet. Known as telecommuting, this trend is expected to catch up with most office workers in the coming decades.
How is the trend likely to impact society and the way we live and work?
Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Telecommuting is gifted by technology as well as internet. It is used by a number of people and they also get a handsome amount of money while doing the jobs at homes with the help of internet. According to me, it is a positive developement because of their merits and this trend would be catched up by next generation. I will discuss about it in following paragraphs.
To begin with, when people works at homes and communicating with their office through internet then they have a lot of time to work without any pressure and any disturbance as well as they can save their time also. For example, when a person same their time and he have an opportunity to spend that time with their family and beloveds.
Further, working and communicating to office with the help of internet then people can do better performance and they do not have any worry about transportation and road accidents also. For example, when people are use their vehicles to go to the offices, sometimes they are in hurry and drive fast that may the reason of accidents but when they use internet at hame for the purpose of their work on that time they have no worries about accidents.
To pu it into a nutshell, there are a lot of merits regarding the phenomenon of workers doing their jobs from home and communicating with their office through internet. Government should permote this by taking some steps.
Right Answer Explanation:Suggested Tips:
The extensive use of internet across the world for all types of intellectual work…If you can sit and work on the internet at your work station, you can as well do it at home…Many are already doing it…Even the meetings can be and are being conducted through online conferencing… Then the work place of future will lose much of their relevance… Imagine how much change will it bring to the work culture and social set up… no wasteful commuting to and fro from work…no huge office complexes at expensive locations; no crowding immediately before and after the working hours… performance measured not by number of hours put in but by the results achieved… parents able to take better care of children… crèches losing much of their relevance… but that will also perhaps make life more monotonous… not having to go anywhere for work… people will perhaps yearn to just go out…
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...obs at homes with the help of internet. According to me, it is a positive developement because ...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...nce as well as they can save their time also. For example, when a person same their ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...e, when a person same their time and he have an opportunity to spend that time with ...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...about transportation and road accidents also. For example, when people are use their...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld permote this by taking some steps. Right Answer Explanation:Suggested Tips:...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...orld for all types of intellectual work…If you can sit and work on the internet at...
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Suggestion: Many
... station, you can as well do it at home…Many are already doing it…Even the meetings ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
...do it at home…Many are already doing it…Even the meetings can be and are being condu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, then, well, while, for example, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 31.9359605911 219% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1207.87684729 160% => OK
No of words: 399.0 242.827586207 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 3.92707691288 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83522348687 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 139.433497537 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496240601504 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 379.143842365 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 239.946343864 50.4703680194 475% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.181818182 104.977214359 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.2727272727 20.9669160288 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308308586888 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146795477726 0.0925447433944 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121781252853 0.071462118173 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189430583411 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128531061719 0.0609392437508 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 12.6369458128 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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