Any new technological development in the recent years is a boon or curse for the society in general.What is your opinion.
computers have been one of the remarkable contrivances that have influenced human's lifestyle beyond imagination. Although some scientists hate computer that it is addictive and reduce human intelligence, in my opinion, it is a boon to humanity since it educates, entertains and reduce human labor.
Quite a few merits can be derived from a computer which makes it a favorite among different strata of life. An oft-quoted advantage is a computer assists us in education. For instance, Computers are helping students to publish various articles and journals to enhance their academic excellence. Another benefit is computers provide entertainment.It goes without saying that Teenagers use computers to enjoy a wide range of programs and music.As a result, youth can easily get relieved from stress after busy work life.A further virtue is the computer is human labor is getting reduced.This can be clearly established by the fact that HP a leading computer manufacturer forecast by 2020 more than fifty percent of the human workforce in all workstations will be replaced by computers.
However, the quite common criticisms about the computer is addictive to the extent that student's studies are at stake.Besides, excessive using of computer results in reducing human intelligence. Nevertheless, these arguments hold little water to say the computer is not productive.In fact, children nowadays they are addicted to electronic toys and video games, in turn, results in a lot of addiction to the extent that their family and social life are getting damaged.Furthermore, due to the excess stress in the individual's lifestyle and working conditions, humans are losing their intelligence.
In conclusion, not with standing with minor negative aspects, I strongly assert that Computers has been significantly beneficial to the humanity and the drawbacks can be minimized with proper care and attention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52054794521 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18755967569 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61301369863 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.302769765 50.4703680194 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.111111111 104.977214359 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4444444444 20.9669160288 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.25397266985 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0184116915413 0.242375264174 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0104427087987 0.0925447433944 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0199007856086 0.071462118173 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0128708057357 0.151781067708 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165731541125 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 12.6369458128 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 53.1260098522 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.9458128079 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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