Are all the jobs equal? Are skilled and unskilled employes treated equally? Have yoy heard of manual scavengers? Write about the problems faced by unskilled employees. What do you suggest the people to stop the doing discriminations?
Right From birth to death, most of our efforts are concerned with the fulfillment of basic needs, example, food, shelter and clothing. As far as the question of equalization of skilled and unskilled employments. I will discuss difficulties faced by unskilled workers and some suggestions for people to stop discriminations with unskilled employers.
To begin with, the employers who are unskilled they have to face many problems, like they do not earn good and the people who get work from them, they do not pay good. Moreover, the rate of unemployment is increased due to which sometime they choose wrong path and crime rate is also boost.
Apart from this, people should stop the discrimination with unskilled person because they will get more opportunities of employments. Furthermore, they will get chance to show their personal experience and which will help them in good earning. Besides this, unskilled persons can live luxurious life and provide proper education to their offsprings due to good earning.In addition, in this era all people have equal they due to which they can live a life anyway.
In conclusion, it can be said that people should stop the doing discrimination with unskilled workers it is beneficial for them. My opinion is government should provide them working skills, which will do financially help them in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13636363636 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87100063185 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3154237205 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234568062421 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109292854991 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898962826149 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153367065267 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442895720287 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.