Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether you support them or not
It is irrefutable that, Popularity of extreme sports has continued to grow over the last decade. Some people would like to do some dangerous sports like scuba-diving and bull fighting in our countries. It is inclined was believe that some dangerous adventure sports affect human life and beings to be promoted. This essay will discuss some advantages and disadvantages of adventure sports.
On the hand, People who are in favor adventure sports claim. The risk-taking sports help in the development Self-confidence and independence of a person. For instance, By successfully facing up the challenging of adventures sports like are scuba-diving and rope-climbing, young people overcome their fears. Specifically, going through a dangerous experience give them.
On the other hand, opponents of extreme sports say that, being a extreme sportsman is very risky and dangerous. If rope a break while bungee jumping, for example, a participant will be seriously injured or even die. Also equipment are these sports very expensive. Some people cannot purchase them.
In conclusion, Adventure sports are very dangerous. Some people believed that adventure sports is very risky like rope-climbing and bungee jumping because participant will be injured or even die. Furthermore, many people cannot purchase sports equipment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07675153368 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7916976048 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 20.9669160288 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12100405501 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443831059202 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445003247172 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821628170421 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012743251971 0.0609392437508 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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