Because university degrees can get jobs with higher salaries, university students should pay full cost for their education. Do you agree or not?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that because university degrees can get jobs with higher salaries, university students should pay full of cost for their education. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do entirely agree with this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that university degrees can only contribute to helping students to achieve their goals in different sectors or fields, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various other fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such an essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why I am in the favour of university degrees.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the merits of the university degrees are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ll only lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do entirely agree with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94636015326 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79806306958 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1947089243 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.363636364 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313323335963 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102100078072 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139383635817 0.071462118173 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184068422649 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130039623846 0.0609392437508 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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