There are many ways through which crime can be diminished in young children. Good parenting skills is one of them. I profoundly agree that the good parenting skills are essential. In this essay, I will give my point of view with examples.
Firstly, good parenting skills which makes them listen to their parents comes can be attained by teaching the parents on those skills. This includes handling a stubborn child, inculcating good habits with young people etc., For example parents can be taught how to handle the situation when a child wants to buy a toy that is highly expensive and not affordable or nurture good habits that will make the kid to behave themselves.
On the other hand, if the parents are not guided on the upbringing of their child, it may have devastating effect on the child`s future. As the parents do not know how to handle their offspring’s the children may start thinking and behaving criminally when they don’t get what they want. As an example, a teenager may become a juvenile with criminal records due to inadequate support and care from their parents.
In this essay, we discussed the advantages of good parenting skills and its importance. Hence every parent should be training with skills on upbringing their young ones to reduce the number of young criminals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96832579186 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65800806225 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601809954751 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.995004131 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8181818182 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26933377349 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111917637645 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570595322228 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168723161615 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174730354203 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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