There is a colossal upsurge in over packaged products. Some believe that it is the responsibility of the manufacturer to avoid over packing the products while others contend that the responsibility lies with the consumers. I profoundly believe that the accountability is with the manufacturer than consumer and will elaborate my point of view in this essay.
Firstly, the products are over packaged for myriad of reasons. The manufacturer wants the products to appear trendy which will eventually attract more buyers. It will also help in preserving the freshness, increases the durability and safety of the product. With the recent advancement in online shopping most of the manufacturers are delivering the products to homes and pack it in such a way that the items don’t get damaged while in transit. This includes various items such as mobile phones, watches etc., Hence the producers opt for over packing their products.
On the flip side, extreme packing of products consume more non-recyclable raw materials which cause detrimental effects to the environment. This also augments the price of the product. If manufacturing cost of a product is $10, it will be sold at $50 which includes the cost of the packing materials. Getting rid of the over packaging will diminish the price of the product to some extent.
Hence, In order to lessen the price of the products and curtail the environmental ill effects, it is the responsibility of the manufacturers as they are the ones who over pack the items. Manufacturers need to come out of their preconceived notions and instead they can come up with alternative solutions like advertisements, marketing strategies to attract the buyers and also save the environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18279569892 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11256841147 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7961612723 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26388363992 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100996443652 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535805988641 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168329146239 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559226273346 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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