Recently there is a colossal upsurge in the online shopping which is destroying the local business. There are both merits and demerits of online shopping. In this essay, I will elaborate my point of view.
Firstly, the most prominent advantage of online shopping is the convenience of the consumers who wish to perform the purchase through internet. The buyers may not have to spend hours to commute to the shop, shall avoid the crowd and save the cost of the travel. To illustrate, an individual who wants to purchase an electronic gadget, may look for the features and review online and order the same within few minutes. In addition, he may also not have to carry the device back home himself and will be delivered.
On the other hand, the disadvantage of e-shopping is that, shoppers may be cheated with a low quality product and the items may not appear the same way as it looks in the photograph. For example, in the website the original color of a shirt may be purple and it may appear red on screen. The purchaser may be tricked and end up ordering a wrong product. They may have tp lodge a complaint and follow-up and sometimes it may not be possible to get their preferred product.
To sum up, hashing out the aforementioned deliberation, I profoundly believe that the online shopping has more advantages than disadvantage due the comfort experienced.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, look, may, so, for example, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79324894515 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73919293032 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8272737975 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177256962247 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073261468078 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669560041087 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133744535584 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761123375886 0.0609392437508 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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