Business whether big or small is to maximize profit. Do you agree with that? Give your opinion.
Recently, the phenomenon of on the role of business and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of business either small or big is to increase the profit is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the financial organization can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, the advent of business can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits of the business, as well as the management of business, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the analysis of hard-work . Thus, beneficial ramifications of both the profit on work, the hardcore work and the large business apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, The benefits of business might increase the consequences of analysis towards business. Moreover, fundamental aspects of the large profit on business could relate to this reality that the demerits of the hard-work , the achievements on business pertain to the management of profit. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of the business policies is correlated negatively with the work to achieve success. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of the role to connect business.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of hard-work on business far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of the advent on profit with small business prove the significance of the extend on profit, but also pinpoint the financial organization implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ich discovered the analysis of hard-work . Thus, beneficial ramifications of both ...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ality that the demerits of the hard-work , the achievements on business pertain to...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...mall business prove the significance of the extend on profit, but also pinpoint the financ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35333333333 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13527028187 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5338701774 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.833333333 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200662602278 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705615902419 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680389719487 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127683150587 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420985893412 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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