A business whether big or small is to maximize profit. Do you agree with that? Give your opinion.
Although such topics will never yield a consensual agreement a dailogue on business maximize profit can lead to thought provoking discussions. my view it that irrespective of numerous ideas that exist on either sides, maximizing profit leads the organisation in a positive approach. through the course of this essay i shall explain my opinion by considering both the sides of the argument.
There are few disadvantages in many organisations by spending lots of money in their company. many euntroprenoures know that this profit can be taken only after few years, by knowing that they try to invest more and more money on the employers of the organisations which leads to loss of the company.
Many small industry businesses are competing and developing by recovering their profit of what they invested in a business. they equally take out their profit shares every month weather it is big or small which is according to the sales of the company. futhermore after taking out their investment from the company after many years they get to be succes in the business industry.
my point of view is many business should first take their profit or the initial capital of what they invested in the business. moreover after they take out their capital with out risk now they are allowed to develop the company which now maximize the profit of the organisation.
to conclude with, there is potential evidence i have produced from my side that people need to maximize their profit by the starting stage where they do not invest the capital and develop by the first and they should not get loss in the share or money
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07967124869 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55859375 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.800401186 50.4703680194 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.428571429 104.977214359 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5714285714 20.9669160288 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174997109384 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733706288212 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516306840702 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174997109384 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 12.6369458128 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.9458128079 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.94827586207 302% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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