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Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

wild animals are been extinct vowadays due to the low maintanence and low habbitate,only few specified animals are
protected as they are wide in rage,as many people belive that all wild aninmals should be protected.
my point of view will be disscused in the following paragraph

nowadays people are so specified in protecting wild animals. we find some animals are endangered and
protective facility is not improved for them .animals like tiger, lion ect are given the first preference
for the protection.wild animals are so danger and they fetch for their meat or food. wild animals creat their
habitate in wild forest and rain forest.animals are wild and arogent due to the less shelter and food concequently for their own safety.

my point of view is people and government should increase the wild animals habitat and should increase the zoo ,we should have the
government organisation as we have for pets animals for eg. blue cross for dogs .rules and laws should begin with government for
wild animals . accordingly zoos should be increased for the welfare of protection.

in conclusion, each an every wild animal should be protected equally .provide them equal shelter and food and as we are people we should
raise rules and laws for their protection and people who visit to see them as well should be protected

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, so, well, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13574660633 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70443262954 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5739562438 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.875 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358506983818 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173275820439 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923420539493 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159928235154 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989810539728 0.056905535591 174% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, so, well, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments