Cars and Aeroplanes have become a significant part of modern life what is your opinion?

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Cars and Aeroplanes have become a significant part of modern life what is your opinion?

The importance of cars and Aeroplanes,Which was always debatable, but has now become more controvrsial Which many people claimimg that its in beneficial which other reject this nation. The sustainable influence of cars and aeroplanes has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on recent years. In my opinion many people claim that these modes of transportation play an major role in saving time.This essay will elaborate how save time for people and thus will lead to a logical conclusion

At the outset, there are numerous reasons for cars and aeroplanes but the most conspicious one stems from the fact that transport modes became very important in noways. As an illustration development increase with new cars. Furthermore people should travel easily with family. Therefore its very important in daily life.

Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of cars and aeroplanes, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that the cities become a big traffic jam. For instance it creates pollution as compare to other vehicles. In addition most off the accident are happening these days.

From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of cars and aeroplanes is prominent and the way most off people use the car and save the time should be overlooked either.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17937219731 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79731502421 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600896860987 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.407293495 50.4703680194 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147740303414 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048522665384 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439871088633 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876419317184 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287801695795 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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