In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?

Recently, the phenomenon of using credit cards in society and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of debit cards is highly beneficial, this issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that applying cash can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.

From a social standpoint, digital banking can provide the society with some beneficial effects which are rooted in the fact merits of pay check , as well as digital money, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic research which discovered payment rates. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both financial transactions and online shopping apparently can be seen.

Within the realm of science, credit cards might increase the consequences of digital theft. Moreover, fundamental aspects of government taxes could relate to this reality that the demerits of a cashless community pertain to saving time. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of Internet shopping is correlated negatively with credit cards. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of spending money.

To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments an both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of paying by cash far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of debit cards prove the significance of digital marketing, but also pinpoint income implications.

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Average: 8.5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50597609562 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0873423917 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653386454183 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7377647575 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122305200746 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392177732644 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428409861975 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661419289681 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533289702419 0.0609392437508 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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