In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
In modern era, credit card usage is indefinitely most used compared to cash. In this essay, I shall explain in agreement that advantages outweigh disadvantages, credit cards are now the future.
Firstly, there are many reasons why people choose to use credit cards verses cash. One main reason is that credit cards firstly offer security, secondly are comfortable and thirdly one can get more for the money spend. For example, credit cards in case of theft secure clients assets. Neither, cash nor debit cards offer such services users. In general, individuals are able to get more for their money because banks check the way one uses the credit line, how often do you pay. if all checks come up clean, banks are able to extend and advance credit loans and credit lines. Such services are not offered by a cash society.
In addition, bank systems are using high technology approaches and innovative strategies to offer maximum products to their clients. Although, at times people feel that cash is the amount physically counted and free of charge, credit cards create enormous opportunities through shared companies and free alternative advantages. Furthermore, because we as human race are working longer hours to achieve growth credit cards offer variety of ways to shop online, order and collect necessities with the touch of a button.
In conclusion, the future predicts that credit cards are here to stay. In my opinion cash seems to be less used, or simply deposited in a bank. As a result, points can be collected from the usage of a card, as well as traveling is now more secure. We live in a paperless society where spending is controlled through banking systems and large corporates.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00352112676 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5414901706 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3566977437 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8125 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8125 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182687842617 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633949637893 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449510399151 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112985748969 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531292099145 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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