The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
Many people think that animals have right to live freely in their natural habitat. However, in order to spread knowledge about these creatures, we need zoos. This essay will discuss about role of zoo in our society in more detail with relevant examples.
Firstly, today many species are on verge of extinction and today's generation do not have knowledge of such creatures. Hence, to spread knowledge of such animals, zoo plays critical and vital role. People can learn and know about these animals and can get idea of their natural habitat, their food and other traits. For instance, many zoos in the World have Asiatic Lion in captivity which help zoos to spread essential knowledge of this predator who is listed in the endangered category. Hence, Zoos play vital part to connect humans with animals.
Secondly, many people think that condition of today's zoos is very poor and animals live in congested space. However, today all zoos in the World, strictly monitored by government body and it does not allow any minor loophole inside the zoo. Apart from that, many zoos organize various events and workshops for children and college students to guide them to preserve ecosystem around their neighborhood. For instance, with extensive efforts from all zoos in India, today population of Asiatic Lion increased significantly.
In conclusion, zoos create bridge between wildlife species and humans and they play vital role to preserve ecosystem in its natural form.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16736401674 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42607838704 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585774058577 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4999772417 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202964842543 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767411851923 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433976848234 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122862983098 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404831424809 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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