Computer technology has more of a negative impact than a positive impact on the society. Do you agree?
On the one hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant benefits of computer technology is the availability of extra time. For example, mother, unlike in the past, now have more time to spend with their families, as less time is spent doing their house chores, thanks to efficient household machinery.
On the other hand, there are several argument in favour of my stance. One of the most preponderant ones is that computer dependency has negative consequences for the community in various ways. Firstly, people are losing their jobs because of machines are increasingly taking over the roles of humans, such as in the car manufacturing sector. According to “Time Magazine December 2017 edition”, the proportion of Americans employed in manufacturing has dropped down from 30 per cent to 10 per cent today. Secondly, a large portion of human population has lost enthusiasm because of computer technology and is increasingly becoming lazier and less efficient.
Lastly, in my opinion, the government of india is taking a great initiative in educating its citizens against the negative impact of computer technology . Citizens are being encouraged to spend a significant portion of their time in physical activity like games and exercise, to compensate for their computer.
One can conclude that despite having some benefits, the drawbacks of computer technology in the society are indeed too dire to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: several arguments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30263157895 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95697360692 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.930952283 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.9 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.25397266985 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152548375852 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056007049619 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609053706402 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884794457919 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026270786762 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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