With the rise is use of internet facilities results in generation of several problems in our society.Discuss the problems and its solution.

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With the rise is use of internet facilities results in generation of several problems in our society.Discuss the problems and its solution.

Surely, there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed daramatically.A quick reflection on typical day reveals over uses of internet has been the one of prominent topics in the contemporary discussion people have always been intrigued to analyze and explain several problems in our society regarding this, I would it is happening mainly due to rise in use of internet facilities and can be solved be implement the solution discussed in the essay.

To begin with, internet is very useful in our life. But the over usage of internet cause bad impact on the child’s future. There are many bad effects of over usage of internet. Youngsters not consternate on their health and fitness and they spend more time on internet. Moreover, they don’t focus on their studies also, they wastage of time in online games and videos and many more.Futhermore, rise in use of internet increasing hacking problems. Hackers can easily hack website and personal data with the help of internet.

Probing ahead, every problem has solution. There are many solutions to stop this problem government should provide the advance cyber security so we can protect our data and profile such as; antivirus software should be installed so virus cannot damage our system.Movingfurther, parents should look after their child’s activity. That is they should limit their children internet surfing period.

To conclude, in this modern era internet is important part of everyone’s life but it use in proper way.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ant part of everyone's life but it use in proper way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21544715447 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90836826906 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 126.619035557 50.4703680194 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.636363636 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28302807294 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104676843256 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716878746849 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147369899577 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541492922332 0.0609392437508 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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