with the rise in the use of internet facilities result in the generation of several problems in our society discuss the problems and solutions?
surely, there has been no time in history where the lives of people changed dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals internet facilities has one of the prominent topic in the contemporary discussion. people have always been intrigued to analyze and explain several problem in our society. Regarding this, i would say it is happening mainly due to rise in internet facilities can be solved by implementing. the solution will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, internet is the important part of our life but the over use of internet causes many problem in our society. children spent the all time on internet to playing games, watching movies and videos, listening songs etc they would not serious about their study they compromise with their future as well as they easy access the adult sites that creates mental and the physical problems. the rise in the internet facilities also increases the hacking problem. For example the american F16 data is hacked by the soviet union. hackers stolen the data of large companies through internet.
On the other hand, there are many solution to protect the society from these problems. the important solution is make advance cyber security that protect our data from the hackers. secondly parents should aware about the wrong uses of the
internet and they also look their children activities. an parents should not give mobile phones to their small children. some adult websites should be banned by government as well as the data limit also set according to the age of children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03100775194 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49801315196 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.6968084121 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5333333333 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313864489939 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975991623404 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998109080483 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156650154898 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930841264217 0.0609392437508 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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