Children in numerous nations prefer more fast food and snacks. Discuss causes, effects and solutions of it.
A little retrospection would reveals and history has witnessed that eating habits of people changed as compare to past time. Nowadays, children like to eat junk foods more and more over homemade foods. Although,such food has less nutritional value when compared to the homemade items, but still, the trend of eating fast food is catching fast among the younger generation. This essay, I will discuss the causes, effects and solutions to short out this phenomenon.
To begin with, numerous reasons are driving children towards unhealthy options. The most prominent is, parents are rooted to their routine which led them lack of time to prepare food at home as a result children go outside for eating junk food. Not only this, eating at restaurants has also become a part of the status symbol among youngsters and as a result, young kids are spending a significant share of their pocket money at these places.
Nevertheless, overconsumption of fast food can impact the health of children. Needless to say, fast food is generally fried to taste good, thus having more of fried food can increase cholesterol which in turn puts a bad effect on the functioning of the heart. What is more, having junk food often can make children obese which is the main reason behind many health problems.
To sum up, I firmly believe, undoubtedly, fast food is easily available and not overpriced, however, it has less nutritional content. Consuming junk food can make children obese and increase health issues. Therefore, it is advisable to eat to homemade nutritious food item than fast food for a fit and healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01492537313 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66235984543 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608208955224 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2528315637 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299463437513 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110722620832 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583003107462 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177986425226 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593169748815 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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