If you do not wear your contact lenses, for instance, the peeling and cutting of onions definitely brings tears to your eyes. Why? Because onions contain amino acid sulfoxides and sulfenic acids. Both of these constituents remain in separate chambers of o

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If you do not wear your contact lenses, for instance, the peeling and cutting of onions definitely brings tears to your eyes. Why? Because onions contain amino acid sulfoxides and sulfenic acids. Both of these constituents remain in separate chambers of onion peel, but when the latter is cut, they mix with each other and produce a volatile sulphur compound. When this vapour reacts with the moisture in the air, it forms sulphuric acid. It is this which causes the burning sensation in our eyes and makes tear glands secrete. It is also this compound which makes our utensils and hands smell, even after washing them with water.

However, there are ways in which we can avoid tears while cutting onions. One way is by reducing air circulation, by turning off AC and fans, for example, in order to lessen the spread of the gas; another option is to refrigerate onions before cutting, so that the constituents freeze and sulphuric acid isn’t produced. Also, burning lamps attract the gases released when cutting onions, stopping them from mixing with the moisture in our eyes.

The text offered insight into constituents of onion and the author began by explaning that how to stop watering in eyes during peeling onion, Watering in eyes should be stopped by turning of AC and fans to stopping them from mixing with the moisture in our eyes.

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Average: 2.2 (1 vote)
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 20.9802955665 14% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 31.9359605911 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 216.0 1207.87684729 18% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 47.0 242.827586207 19% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59574468085 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.6183304987 3.92707691288 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33073428726 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 37.0 139.433497537 27% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.787234042553 0.580463131201 136% => OK
syllable_count: 63.9 379.143842365 17% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6551724138 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.5024630542 229% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 50.4703680194 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 216.0 104.977214359 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.0 20.9669160288 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 7.25397266985 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 6.9802955665 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990922754716 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990922754716 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990922754716 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 12.6369458128 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.9458128079 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.29 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 11.0 55.0591133005 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 23.5 9.94827586207 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.3980295567 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.5123152709 228% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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