The environment we live in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this?

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The environment we live in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this?

<p class="MsoNormal">Nowadays, various issues regarding environment is increasing
day by day. There are several types of issues such as deforestation, private vehicles
and toxic gases etcetera, which create problems for our environment. I will
discuss positive and negative impact of this statement in further paragraphs.</p>

<p class="MsoNormal">To begin with, there are many behave and reasons in the
environment which cause inevitable consequences such as pollution. First and
foremost, the vital and common issue is greenhouses emissions. Hence, people
still do not have the awareness to protect the environment. At last but not
least, the garbage is being burned commonly causing serious consequences.</p>

<p class="MsoNormal">On the other hand, Further reinforcing, many sides share the
responsibility with different percentages. Firstly, the governments are the
first responsible party since they have the ability to stop these behave
legally. Also, the individuals who share in climate change causes. For
instance, the owners of greenhouses. Furthermore, the scientists and
researchers, because they have not used their skills to enrich this vital issue
with solutions.</p>

<p class="MsoNormal">In conclusion, we can say that it is our responsibility to
protect our environment and to save our mother earth from being deteriorated.</p>

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gases'' or 'gas's'?
Suggestion: gases'; gas's
...orestation, private vehicles and toxic gases etcetera, which create problems for our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, still, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 193.0 242.827586207 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.39896373057 5.00649968141 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.00018523644 2.71678728327 184% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673575129534 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.2204677814 50.4703680194 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 7.25397266985 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.12807881773 412% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117078426204 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396570854135 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353768668631 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0358486833182 0.151781067708 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341954656579 0.0609392437508 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.84 11.5310837438 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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