The environment we live in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this?

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The environment we live in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this?

<p class="MsoNormal">One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is
colossal upsurge in environment problem in all over the world. There are a wide
range of factors that account for why this is happening. Nowadays, various
issues regarding environment is increasing day by day. There are several types
of issues such as deforestation, private vehicles and toxic gases etcetera, which
create problems for our environment. I will discuss positive and negative
impact of this statement in further paragraphs.</p>

<p class="MsoNormal">To begin with, there are many behave and reasons in the
environment which cause inevitable consequences such as pollution. First and
foremost, the vital and common issue is greenhouses emissions. Hence, people
still do not have the awareness to protect the environment. At last but not
least, the garbage is being burned commonly causing serious consequences.</p>

<p class="MsoNormal">On the other hand, Further reinforcing, many sides share the
responsibility with different percentages. Firstly, the governments are the
first responsible party since they have the ability to stop these behave
legally. Also, the individuals who share in climate change causes. For
instance, the owners of greenhouses. Furthermore, the scientists and
researchers, because they have not used their skills to enrich this vital issue
with solutions.</p>

<span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;
mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-fareast-font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-theme-font:
minor-latin;mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-bidi-font-family:Raavi;
mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:
EN-US;mso-bidi-language:PA">In conclusion, we can say that it is our
responsibility to protect our environment and to save our mother earth from
being deteriorated</span>

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gases'' or 'gas's'?
Suggestion: gases'; gas's
...forestation, private vehicles and toxic gases etcetera, which create problems for ou...
^^^^^
Line 25, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &quot
...ght:115%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"; mso-ascii-theme-font...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, still, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1207.87684729 146% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 7.63203463203 5.00649968141 152% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 11.3392118467 2.71678728327 417% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.57093596059 140% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 164.512136499 50.4703680194 326% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.916666667 104.977214359 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.12807881773 606% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946281979433 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364134318291 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314512115677 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0295078840735 0.151781067708 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343847597055 0.0609392437508 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 12.6369458128 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 1.43 53.1260098522 3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 10.9458128079 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 26.97 11.5310837438 234% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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