Should parents be held legally responsible for children's actions?
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:7.5pt;line-height:normal;mso-outline-level:
1;background:#FAFAFA"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;mso-font-kerning:18.0pt">In this ever advancing era, development can be seen happening cosmically be it is
the social, political or economical aspect. The debate surrounding parenting of
children. Which was earlier debatable has now become controversial. However, I partially
agree with the proposed perspective. The following exposition will further
bolster my views in this regard.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:7.5pt;line-height:normal;mso-outline-level:
1;background:#FAFAFA"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;mso-font-kerning:18.0pt">To begin with, I would like to say that parents play vital role in scholar’s life.
Firstly, parents are first role model of their children. Parents have legal
responsibility of upbringing child and they cannot avoid that parents are
pretty much aware of positive and negative side of children. For instance,
children do various types of crimes such as fight and argue with others.
Moreover, it is also a responsibility of every parent to take care of their
child’s overall growth.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:7.5pt;line-height:normal;mso-outline-level:
1;background:#FAFAFA"><span style="font-size:16.0pt;mso-font-kerning:18.0pt">On the dark side, it’s also a responsibility of juveniles that they should give
respect to their elder and younger ones and should avoid the company of the bad
individual. Furthermore, sometimes parents are not physically able to even
worry about their kids and the behavior they give off. For example, some child
ignores their parents when they reach at the age of 18+ they do their own
wishes.<o:p></o:p></span></p><span style="font-size:16.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-fareast-font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-theme-font:
minor-latin;mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman";
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mso-fareast-language:EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">To sum up, parents are most responsible for their childern’s growth but also child’s responsibility to co-operate
with their parents.</span>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 1207.87684729 189% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 9.54811715481 5.00649968141 191% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 15.1481078167 2.71678728327 558% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665271966527 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 379.143842365 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.5 1.57093596059 159% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 212.463511695 50.4703680194 421% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.454545455 104.977214359 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.25397266985 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.12807881773 581% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116435157089 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802926525533 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734145671252 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517897189824 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573953941592 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 12.6369458128 272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -25.98 53.1260098522 -49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.1 10.9458128079 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 38.11 11.5310837438 330% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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