Should parents be held legally responsible for the actions of their children? Do you agree with this opinion? Support your position with your own study, experience or observations?
Parent responsibilities in controlling the actions of children are of paramount importance these days. One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is that parents should be legally responsible for the behaviors of their children since their future prosperity could be determined from these act, but it does not depend on parents always as other factors also involve in controlling their actions. Thus, I partially agree with this statement as described below.
There are numerous arguments to support my stance, but the most preponderant one is that parents become legally responsible when the baby introduces in this world. Not only helps in controlling their actions, but also helps in benefiting the children by teaching them about attention, love, passion and good attitudes, which help in driving them towards successful life. For example, when children start learning how to talk during their childhood days, beyond doubt, parent only should teach them in right manner, which means parents become legally responsible in that situation. Needless to say, all these benefits stand child actions in good stead as far as attitudes of children is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that school also plays a vital role to define the actions of the children because they spend the maximum amount of time in a school once they grown from child stage. Besides, it also becomes legally responsible in leading the children’s actions. To quote an instance, most of the school, which were believed to be educated the children for successful life. As a result, children become good human being in our society. Hence, it is apparent why many are supporting against this stance, too.
To conclude, considering the above discussion, not only parents become responsible for the actions of the children, but also others also are part of it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29765886288 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74716948709 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555183946488 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4983947948 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283585800057 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106677485336 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487800905646 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181564408598 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625945835034 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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