Should parents be held legally responsible for the actions of their children. Do you agree with this opinion? Support your position with your own study ,experience and observation.
The importance of parents’ responsibility for the actions of their children, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of parents’ responsibilities of their children has sparked controversy over the potential impact of this trend on the whole society in recent years. It can be agreed that parents play a vital role on their children, though it has drawbacks. This essay will elaborate on how children cannot afford to make mistakes and how juvenile delinquency has increased due to a lack of parents supervision, and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerable reasons why parents should be legally responsible for their children, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that children are unable to afford their mistakes. As an illustration, from my own experience, when I was a primary school student, I broke the window of my classroom which would cost me six hundred dollars. However, I cannot afford this amount of money although I did apologize sincerely to my teachers, my father helped me pay this compensation lastly. Therefore, parents should be held legally responsible for their children.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that children should be responsible for themselves as there are innumerable reasons but the most salient one is the consecutively increasing juvenile delinquency. For instance, the research has invariably revealed that China’s juvenile delinquency rate has dramatically increased five times compared with 2016 after the Legal Parent Law was introduced to the whole society. Thus, parents should not be legally responsible for the actions of their children.
In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the benefits of the legal responsibilities of parents are prominent, although juvenile delinquency should be well handled.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as a primary school student, I broke the window of my classroom which would cost ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, lastly, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48829431438 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19067752018 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558528428094 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6803073391 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.75 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343513711787 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160070962272 0.0925447433944 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116203220471 0.071462118173 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209505757828 0.151781067708 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452211843453 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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