What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years，antibiotics, airplane, or computers? And why?
Today life, without a computer is a fantasy. The technological advancement has changed the people - the way we think, and the way we work. Most section of people argue that computer is an essential invention among people considering its various benefits, while few people have an opinions contrary to it. I am inclined to believe that using computer advancement would totally be wise and it is one of best inventions in the past 100 years as compared to other inventions such as airplane, car and aircraft.
To begin with, it is believed that using computer is an imperative and could bring exciting experiences. The first point is that computer plays an integral part in enhancing cognitive ability of people. due to this, children can grow with strong education. The secondary point is that invention of computer helps our country to increase their economy by means of computerized railway system and other education sector. For example, share market is a best instance that use of computer advancements.
Furthermore, overtime, computer has grown in importance, and this is gaining most traction across all countries. Moreover, time is the precious factor these days and it makes human life faster and easier due to its huge advantages.
To sum up, I second my outlook of looking computer advantages than other inventions despite legitimate reasons. There is a line between 'use' and 'abuse' and we must teach this to our people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, while, for example, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08898305085 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80139543999 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631355932203 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1800962257 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3846153846 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20350756599 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615752803806 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565738098637 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102972217484 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600054694436 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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