It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
It is important for children to distinguish between right and wrong in young age. Some would argue that punishment is essential for the kids to learn from the mistake. It is agreed that punishment is necessary for the kids to change the behaviour and learn from their error. This essay will first discuss that parents and teachers should monitor incessantly and correct them, and then discuss that punishment should not be physical or emotional, followed by a logical conclusion.
Children are most vulnerable to get affected by surrounding and digital media. It is often getting painful for the parents and teachers to observe what they watch on the internet or smart devices. Hence it is mandatory for the parents and teacher to teach the dangerous of online activity and how to conduct themselves properly. It is often the case that children may hesitate to discuss their problem with their parents or teachers.Therefore, it is imperative to block inimical sites from their view which has a possibility of exploiting the kids. For example, as per survey from Oxford University government had seen 80% drop in online exploitation after the introduction of "social behaviour cases".
Despite this, many children continue their wrong deeds, so punishment is inevitable to correct them. When parents and teacher try to discipline their kids, they should be very conscious that they do not affect them mentally. Many parents support the corporal punishments which may affect young people mentally and physically and starts developing an aversion. Instead, they can speak with them first and try to make them understand the consequences of their action. For example, as per the Indian government recent survey, the pupils who go through the physical assault in young age has a more chance of getting arrogant when they grow up. Therefore, the government had passed a law to cease the physical punishment in schools.
In conclusion, it is crucial for the children to learn about right and wrong at a young age. Although punishment is needed to correct them, parents should be vigilant about the impact of the external surroundings and correct without affecting them mentally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, may, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1207.87684729 152% => OK
No of words: 353.0 242.827586207 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20679886686 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82063366774 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518413597734 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 379.143842365 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0884716563 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.117647059 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 6.9802955665 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 2.75862068966 544% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319264599587 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107913395215 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723873587567 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209070607966 0.151781067708 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908479752167 0.0609392437508 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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