Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether u support them or not
These days there is an ongoing debate among people about dangerous sports. While it is possible to
claim that dangerous sports activities might harm to individuals, my view is that the disadvantages
outweigh the advantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing the arguments
from both the sides.
There are several reasons why people think sports like bungee jumping, extreme skiing are
very dangerous in nature as these are prone to accidents. It can also be argued that while
playing these types of sports, people might damage their body parts. It should also be taken
into account that these sports may result in injury that hamper anyone's ability to take part
in sports in future.
Those who argue for dangerous sports have different view and say that it can actually be
a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that these sports relax you from a stressful life. Then, there
are concerns about the adrenaline push it gives, which excite people to reach beyond limits and not
treating this as a sport only.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that dangerous sports
should be avoided. I would strongly recommend that people should not risk their life thus avoid
these sports.
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...heir body parts. It should also be taken into account that these sports may resul...
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...that hamper anyones ability to take part in sports in future. Those who argue ...
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...nyones ability to take part in sports in future. Those who argue for dangerous sport...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99056603774 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27495457061 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599056603774 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8086733601 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.1818181818 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.12807881773 363% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0857812035548 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362206179756 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521143441004 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0303457469593 0.151781067708 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461610098457 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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