Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether you support them or not.

Essay topics: Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether you support them or not.

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The substantial influence of extreme sports has sparked a controversy among the public around the globe. While specifically argument claim that adventurous activities are fun and exciting, a group of luminaries dispute otherwise and hold an opponent’s view. I am inclined highly to accept that adventurous sports should be supported. The agenda of this article is elaborations of extreme activities advantages, which clarifies how it impacts sports industries, advertising agencies, as well as holiday resorts thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why adventurous actions such as mountain biking, jumping over the cliff, bungee jumping, motor crossing, as well as scuba diving are supported. The most conspicuous one lies in the fact that many people are interested to support new sports. In addition, it is highly argued that extreme activities circulate more money. Hence, it can be clearly seen that adventurous actions might affect in, sports-related money, sports channels, startup business, job opportunities, insurance industries and health economy.

Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of dangerous sports, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that extreme sports might lead to serious body-injuries. Moreover, it is strongly claimed that higher level of adrenaline might increase a response time in dangerous situations. Therefore, the importance of adventurous sports and its detriments which might lead to an unrecoverable body injury, waste of money in health care, increase in mortality rate, higher disabled people and environmental damage could be seen with clarity.

To recapitulate, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, my sentiment is that the benefits of adventurous sports far outweigh its drawbacks.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...rly seen that adventurous actions might affect in, sports-related money, sports channels,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74460431655 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12118511 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625899280576 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9738609657 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.083333333 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0991236608999 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389006685106 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328995277099 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533792551646 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348923719766 0.0609392437508 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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