Do you support dangerous activities like extreme skiing, skydiving, bungee jumping or not? What are the reasons for that?
Nowadays, doing exciting and dangerous activities have become popular among the young people all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether the dangerous activities should be supported or not?”. It is a widely held view, playing dangerous sports is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe, one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that adventure sports play a vital role in each society.Therefore, I express several reasons to support this idea. First and foremost is that it gives you a sense of self-confidence to overcome the challenges and fears, have physical fitness, achieve popularity, and reduce depression. Secondly, dangerous sports are in the category of lucrative sports so the industries of sports equipment will be able to grow their sports productions and boost up the revenue. A group of the sportspersons, working at prestigious gyms conducted that such sports are so exciting that contribute to release adrenalin and the young people will be able to try new occasion.
However, undoubtedly the risky and dangerous sports events provide people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that permanent and serious damages happen as a result of adventure activities. Moreover, the expenditure of training and purchasing sports equipment is high in price. A very tangible example to illustrate would be the disability of young people who have been occurred by skiing, skydiving, and mountain climbing.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that playing dangerous sports under professional trainers and efficient training system must be supported. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44599303136 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05872544257 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.402457182 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119349661837 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394151981101 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455896368868 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710899735128 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456045149573 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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