Do you support dangerous activities like extreme skiing??What are the reasons for that?
Recently, the phenomenon of dangerous activities and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate.Although contested by many that trying new occasion is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive.I am inclined to believe that adventurous activity is a plus, and I will analyze that in this essay.
From the sportperson standpoint, lucrative sports can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that economic profits, as well as developing self-esteem, are inextricably bound up.According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment that discovered amounts of balance in the body.Thus, beneficial ramifications of getting the adrenalin going and depression reduction can be seen.
Within the realm of addiction to exciting sports, using drugs might increase the consequences of the bad reaction in the body.Moreover, fundamental aspects of mental problems related to this reality that the demerits of stressful situation pertain to life-threatening circumstances.As an intangible example, a scientific research undertook by a substantial number of scientists has asserted that the downside of serious injuries correlated negatively with less life longevity.Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of disturbing body.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of risky sports far outweigh its drawbacks.Not only do the advantages of awkward and risky exercises prove the significance of physical characteristics, but also pinpoint active personality implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95061728395 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55418354873 2.71678728327 131% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707818930041 0.580463131201 122% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.5024630542 293% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.2904422516 50.4703680194 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 361.5 104.977214359 344% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.75 20.9669160288 290% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.25 7.25397266985 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0582217079677 0.242375264174 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343420362734 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355498837315 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0343420362734 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355498837315 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.0 12.6369458128 293% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.8 53.1260098522 -28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 6.54236453202 310% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 10.9458128079 276% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.12 11.5310837438 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.57 8.32886699507 163% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 55.0591133005 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.0 9.94827586207 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.3980295567 250% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.5123152709 247% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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