Do you think cardless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages.

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Do you think cardless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages.

The importance of the cardless transactions was always a debatable topic. Some people urge that it is very beneficial for countries and the people while others have myriad of concerns about cardless transaction system. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of cardless payments, and give a plausible conclusion.
To start with, with the invent of technology, online and cardless transactions have taken over the banking systems in most countries of the world. The benefits of the cardless economy include transparency of transactions and tracking of black money. It also helps reduce the danger of theft associated with carrying the money. For example, people can make their transactions using their mobile phones and computers sitting in their bedrooms and do not have to wait in long queues in the banks. Thus , it is evident that there are many benefits of the cardless system of transferring money.
On the other hand, this system comes with many drawbacks specially if the user does not have proper information about how to use this system, and this can lead to cyber fraud, and losing their hard earned money to online scammers. For example, in a recent incident a user was asked to change his password through a suspicious account pretending to be bank official. The user got trapped in the scam and lost all his money. Therefore, special awareness schemes should be launched regularly to inform the users about such fraud activities.
To conclude, although there are numerous disadvantages associated with the cardless transactions yet their benefits far outweigh its drawbacks when it comes to the convenience of use and sense of protection from theft.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, to start with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18315018315 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78253737661 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575091575092 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8233976774 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.846153846 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0760969963587 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327801046288 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309790963232 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523554480964 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392134886077 0.0609392437508 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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