Do you think design of a building affects positively or negatively in people's work and life?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals the design of a building has wlays been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people have also been intrigued to explain whether it has a positive or negative impact on our work and life. Regarding this, I would say it can help us mentally as well as physically.
one compelling argument in favour if my stance on this issue has to do with the fact that the design of a building can have a psychological impact on us. this is because we tend to feel more relaxed in a place which looks pleasent and attractive as compared to a place which is distracting or choatic. relaxed people are more productive and can work better or behave better.
looking back at the introductio, one could also argue that the appearance of a place can also affect us physically. this is because different types of work require different set up. because of this,places which take into consideration the habits and requirements of people living there help the residents in becoming more efficient.
Based on the arguments above i would stress that how a place looks influences not only how we feel but also how we work. Therefore, if it is done in the right way, it always helps us in being better and achieving more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7125 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76284562946 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554166666667 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6769683784 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173992897094 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621445588507 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677913929679 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981267627636 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610663671373 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.