Do you think that place where the person grew has an influence on his accomplishments? Explain with example.
When someone is having a great accomplishments in career, people tend to discuss the history of the person himself such as the place he live before or the book he study before. Most of the people think that the place where the person grew up has an influence on who he is, but little think it does not have connection to the successful life. This essay will discuss why the place does not have influence on a person accomplishments.
To start with, the main reason of one person's success is based on their hardworking, creative or intelligent. The place where the person grew up does not matter if one person have passionate on what they trying to work. For example, the billionaire Jack Ma grew up from farmer family, but he never give up and went to town to learn skills and eventually create his brand - Alibaba. Hence, it is safe to mention that the place does not serve the influence of someone accomplishments.
Furthermore, internet is getting popular in this era and everyone can easily browse the web with affordable price no matter where he is. When someone wants to understand something, a simple click on computer can easily find him an answer. According to a research, 90% of people will "Google" it when they need some answer. So, location is not a restriction anymore for gaining knowledge.
In a nutshell, a person's accomplishments is based on what he do instead of where he was. In my opinion, I completely disagree that place where the person grew up has an influence on his accomplishments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'accomplishment'?
Suggestion: accomplishment
When someone is having a great accomplishments in career, people tend to discuss the h...
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Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'studies'.
Suggestion: studies
...the place he live before or the book he study before. Most of the people think that t...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...rew up from farmer family, but he never give up and went to town to learn skills and...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...ons accomplishments is based on what he do instead of where he was. In my opinion,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77358490566 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96947983723 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539622641509 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3547276664 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3076923077 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36500869078 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125919279318 0.0925447433944 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103267320827 0.071462118173 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23270761308 0.151781067708 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116312623119 0.0609392437508 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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