Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes, is one of the most widely-used drugs in the sorld. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long term health costs are high – for smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity.
Do governments have a legitimate role to legislate to protect citizens from the harmful effects of their decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to the individual?
Tobacco had been widely used by some people nowadays although there are a lot of reasons to discourage it. While some think that governments should take the responsibilities to stop their citizens from smoking, some people think that it is entirely up to individual's choice. This essay will discuss why governments have a legitimate role to stop citizens to continue smoking.
According to a research, tobacco contain more than 4000 chemical substances which are harmful to human's body. The chemicals that produced from tobacco is not only bad for smoker himself, but also effecting surrounding people including infants and elders. A report stated that out of 100%, 60% of lung cancer patients have a smoker partner. Hence, the tobacco is endangered human's health and life and it should be banned from everywhere.
Apart from that, tobacco is not environmental friendly as well. People tend to leave the remaining of the product such as cigarette butts after they enjoyed the moment. According to an environmental report, 30% of street rubbish is made up of cigarette butt. By legislate the law, people will not be able to create such big amount of rubbish anymore.
It can be concluded that tobacco is not only giving bad effect to human's health, it also creates environmental problem to our mother Earth. In my opinion, I completely agree government should legislate the law to protect citizens from the harmful effects of smoking.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, while, apart from, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11440677966 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74483074265 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60593220339 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0710220843 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.8461538462 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10286112991 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389427609528 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417395314931 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607270741671 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407245611087 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.