Do you think the popularity of social networking sites is a positive thing, or the end of privacy?
Social networking sites drag people on the way of spoil life. Genrally people waste 2-3 hours in these sites, but especially, youngsters waste 5-6 hours of the day on social networking sites. Based on my opinion, it should be conduct seminars of awareness for the youngsters to come-out from these and inspire to do some productive work which can add value to the life.
Some of the social networking site have features to use photos and videos. Users are more attached with that features. For good photos, people use many software to enhancement in the picture. Demand of the 'DSLR' camera increase due to attraction of photo features. At the result, job oppertunites in Photography sector also opens in wast amount. Special classes are open for photography courses. Students also choice it as a carrier option.
Direct effect of the social networking sites is nagetive but indirectly it creates jobs and improve creativity in the users.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...rk which can add value to the life. Some of the social networking site have features to...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... features. For good photos, people use many software to enhancement in the picture....
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun software seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much software', 'a good deal of software'.
Suggestion: much software; a good deal of software
... features. For good photos, people use many software to enhancement in the picture. Demand o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...action of photo features. At the result, job oppertunites in Photography sector ...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atures. At the result, job oppertunites in Photography sector also opens in wast...
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Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hy courses. Students also choice it as a carrier option. Direct effect of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 1207.87684729 65% => OK
No of words: 156.0 242.827586207 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05769230769 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.92707691288 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64210676154 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 139.433497537 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660256410256 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 379.143842365 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0524449579 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7272727273 104.977214359 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 20.9669160288 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 7.25397266985 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158261471715 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572454545164 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075566255163 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114875057232 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387827529441 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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