edacuation
Recently the phenomenon of employment and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that higher education and gradution from the university are highly beneficial. such issue is regarded both constractive and positive by substantial number of individuals and I am incliend to believe that edacuated people and skilled person can be plus, and I will analyze it in this essay.
From edacuation system in the country standpoint, job can provide a society with some noteceable affect which are rooted in the fact that income and earning money are so important. According to my own experience when i was university student, I performed an academic experiment which discoverd life expactancy factor. Thus, beneficial ramification of both employment and technology apparently can be seen.
Within relam of modern society, higher edacuation might increase the consequence of culture. Moreover fundamental aspect of edacuated person relate to this reality that disadvantage of unimployment pertein to poverty and crime.As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by pristigious university has asserted that the downside of edacuation correlated negatively with civilization.Hence, it is correct to presume the oreconceive notion of training and edacution system in the society.
To conclude, while there are several compeling argument on both sides, I profoundly believe that benefits of higher edacuation far outwheight its drawback. Not only do the advantages of skilled person prove the significance of education, but also pinpoint developed country implication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7731092437 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25127559938 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655462184874 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.0757459031 50.4703680194 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.4 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279539917901 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955642248065 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989785367111 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161047022198 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830853153554 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 53.1260098522 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 11.5310837438 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.32886699507 135% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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