Essay-In under developed countries tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. Discuss your opinion with relevant examples.
In the recent decade, low rate of airfares increased international holidays. Every year, people all over the world take summer and Christmas holiday to different countries.Often, people choose a destination with lower currency values than theirs because this way tourist has more money to spend during holidays.
First of all, tourism has become a major industry for developing countries. Governments of many developing countries encouraging tourism as it a positive business to all sectors such as entertainment, shopping, food and local transport and travel. It has become a lucrative mode of income of people. Thailand, Srilanka, Nepal and many other countries have benefited the citizen and have drastically improved their standard of living and education.
On another hand, despite the advantages of a tourism industry, we can not overlook the damage it can do. Developing and under developing countries tend to lose their traditional culture and value. They tend to adopt lifestyle, food, and languages much to travelers. For instance, in Indian, people are very influenced by western culture and often look down to Indian folk dance, handicraft works, and languages. This can cause stress in the traditional culture and lead to animosity toward tourist.
In conclusion, It has been proven that the tourism can change the lives of people. However, a government of the developed and undeveloped countries must conserve their cultural heritage-which is the main attraction people to travel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Often
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48484848485 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97562922689 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645021645022 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9309582495 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4615384615 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158918794841 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557846129783 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052284687925 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911875839526 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424700437101 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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