Whether design of buildings will have a positive or negative impact on peoples life and work?
These days, there is an outgoing debates between people about design of building will have positive or negative impact of people. While some people claim that design of building is not effect of our life. My view is the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay i shall explain my point of view and why positive impact well design building of people life.
First of all, there are several reason why impact one of them is that well plan structure give good health and impact
of people mind. Well design structure cover most of type of natural issues. For example, in building come morning sunlight so people are healthy of this company because employee need vitamin D and other they give sunlight.
On their side, structure of building give batter atmosphere in company. For instance building's door in north or south side then at noon or after noon not come high sun light in building so it is not to hot at this time and employee doing work batter compare to other. Moreover, best structure give batter to employee to do work amazing and batter.
While there are a strong argument of structure of building. My opinion is that the planed structure more important in our life either home or business. I would strongly be recommended well plan building have more positive impact on our life and work to.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...loyee to do work amazing and batter. While there are a strong argument of structur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7903930131 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35877395538 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554585152838 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0642974354 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3846153846 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403765570591 0.242375264174 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138047813653 0.0925447433944 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135314091386 0.071462118173 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198523019783 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153333163362 0.0609392437508 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.32886699507 83% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 55.0591133005 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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