Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to.
Many people believed that the region plays a vital role in which he or she has grown up. However, in my opinion, native place's environment is only one factor and other are attitude, capability and hard work also play a main role in achieving success.
the native environment also plays one of the important role in individual success such as leadership, social skill etc. These qualities an individual acquires over a period of time. the behaviour of people in the neighbourhood, school friends, and college friends significantly affects behaviour and skill of the person. For instance, Mahatma Gandhi a famous Indian leader received most of his leadership skill from people with whom he spent his childhood time.
On the other hand, it is not only native environment that is responsible for the development of an individual and his success. After an individual moves out from his native place to some other place for work he tends to learn new things that he was not aware of at his home place. Moving to other places introduces an individual to new ideas and new ways of doing things. It allows a person to a thing in a broad perspective and this open-minded thinking plays a vital role in a person’s success. For example, Dhirubhai Ambani a famous Indian businessman achieved all his success only after leaving his hometown. While moving to different places he learned different people and various skills which he was not aware of at his native place. And these new learning helped him rule the business world.
To conclude, the only native environment may not be behind an individual’s success. There are a lot of other factors that take an individual towards success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94366197183 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80214444478 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517605633803 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5773477178 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186842657158 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670628850441 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598224753471 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116828593281 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337666146472 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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