Whether design of buildings will have a positive or negative impact on peoples life and work?

One of the most conspicuous trend in today's world is the impact of design of buildings on people life and work. It is debatable topic but before giving plausible conclusion its merits and demerits should be consider.

Firstly, the design of building of any organisation or infrastructure plays an important role in creating the workable environment. as it design motivates the employee to think in same manner and its helps them to bring innovative ideas which leads to increase in productivity. Needless, to say the design of building is having relationship with the productivity.

Secondly, health of any person is total depend on the design of building as it provides the proper ventilation, outside are is covered with the gardens which brigs individual to be in touch with the nature. It makes them energetic, positive vibes and makes an individual free from diseases. Sometimes, offices are designed in such way that they provide sufficient private space which make employees to work in their comfort zone.

All the arguments outlines above, one can conclude that Good and Creative design always have positive impacts on people life and work.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 187.0 242.827586207 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22459893048 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82740578182 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625668449198 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5781178414 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.555555556 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332333278312 0.242375264174 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135843856485 0.0925447433944 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126450547046 0.071462118173 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211553508783 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921769494616 0.0609392437508 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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