Every invention is followed by its own set of problems to society
Every invention is followed by its own set of problems to society apart from its basic purpose. The smart phone is one such invention in recent days, that has created some problems.
One of the issues is, privacy threats have been increased due to the visibility of a person to certain android applications.Secondly,children are the victims in most of the cases.The cyber crime has increased ever since the invention of smart phones. also,the high radiation emitted by some of the mobile devices, could even damage human brain system.due to the need of high internet connectivity, the mobile signal tower's radiation is also increased. This has affected the survival of various species of birds and other living beings. Even the growth of plants has been affected in such areas, where such towers are located. Many people in recent days are becoming prey for such activity and are getting affected due to continuous immersion with this high radiation
device.
There must be some restriction in usage of this device to reduce such problems. The government must take a right step and approve only certain devices with low radiation emission levels.
also, the privacy steps must be taken and must be intimated to all the users by the device owners
to reduce the security threats. also, the telephone signal towers must be specialized to emit low
radiation levels without affecting the actual signal levels. this helps in preventing the problems to some level.
To conclude,though the smart phones or any other recent invention may create an addiction, it is the individual's responsibility to be in control of the usage of such inventions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, second, secondly, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14869888476 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01100554968 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546468401487 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9698579036 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.12807881773 170% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160784975476 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728879341994 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192034960047 0.071462118173 269% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955414956426 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191081350207 0.0609392437508 314% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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