Experience better than book knowledge. Do you agree or disagree
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals the importance of our experience in our lives has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people have always been intrigued to analyse and explain whether we learn more from books or experience. Regarding this, I would say experience teaches us more than books can ever teach.
one compelling argument in favour of my stance on this issue has to do with the fact that books do not always reveal the truth. this is because sometimes the authors may have the incomplete knowledge or biased views. therefore, they might write something incorrectly or something they believe than writing the truth. To put this into perspective, one of the books I read about Australia mentioned about racism in this country. However, when I came here, I found the situation was not as bad as the author had claimed.
Looking back at the introduction, one could also argue that what we learn from experience stays with us for longer than what we read from books. The reason for this is we see or feel things live and do not need to imagine them. As a result, the memory is vivid and leaves a lasting impression.
Hence, based on the arguments above, I want to stress that experience teaches us the truth which we remember for a long time. therefore, I believe we learn more from our experience than from books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74708171206 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60552835879 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56420233463 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4792129228 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.1428571429 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152913848055 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515852228341 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469770170803 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937799470817 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103094202953 0.0609392437508 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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