Some people think the purpose of education is to prepare the future workforce and make good members of society. Others think the purpose of education should lead to self-fulfillment. What is your opinion?
Surely, there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals that education has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people have always been intrigued to analyse and explain the purpose of education. Regarding this, I would say education should prepare us for our career and make us good citizens.
one compelling argument in favour of my stance on this issue has to do with the fact that education should not be only for our happiness. it should help us solve the problems in the society. this will create a prosperous community where everyone can be happy including people with low literacy. To put this into perspective, when a non-profit organisation helps people in less developed regions, both the provider and the receiver become contended for their efforts.
Looking back at the introduction, one could also argue that when we help others, we feel happy anyway. The reason for this is we are social animals and feel joy in sharing others’ problems and solving them. As a result, it makes us feel that we are contributing to our society and are valuable members of it.
Hence based on the arguments above, I want to stress that education should not only make us better members of our communities but also help us in solving common human problems. Therefore, I firmly believe that it is not simply for our self-fulfilment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, hence, look, regarding, so, therefore, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92712550607 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79954757118 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587044534413 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3726532281 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6153846154 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166219654425 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597492961559 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429463944579 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988271558431 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466313799386 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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