Global problems related to governments and international organisations. what are the problems and what is your opinion?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people has changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals global problems has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. People have always intrigues to analyse and explain the effects of these problems to global and international organisations. Regarding this I believe that it is urgent need of a hour and government should take immediate steps in response to it.
To begin with, the major global problem related to government organisation is the overuse of natural resources. This is because, there is a rapid growth in population, which ultimately result in increase in demand for basic needs. As a result, people tends to start depleting limited available resources. To put this into perspective, due to overuse of fuels, researchers estimate that humankind will runoff by fuel in the next coming 20 years.
In my opinion, globalisation has profoundly disturbed our whole ecosystem. The reason for this is the increment in number of transport accommodation. Due to this, there is a growing population and emission of gases. Also, it leads to origin of different health related diseases like bronchitis and lungs failure, which is a serious needed to be tackled.
To conclude, we should not compromise with nature in accordance to fulfill our demands. As per my perspective, government should make stringent legit rules against it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02780171647 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64224137931 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2133751353 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183241857222 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548523360339 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830879768828 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907967985485 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637379317754 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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