Parents should be held legally responsible for the actions of there children. Do you agree with opinion? Support your position with your own study, experience and observation?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people has changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals nurturing of child by adults has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. People have always intrigued to analyse and explain the influence of parents on children’s day-to-day habits and actions. Regarding this, I would say parents plays a crucial role in actions and behaviour of their children.
One compelling argument in favour of my stance on this issue has to do with the fact that parents are considered as the first tutor in infant’s life. This is because toddler first step towards learning to walk and talk is guided by his parents only. As a result, whether they are guided in the right direction wholly depends upon their guidance. To put this into prospective, it is generally being seen that parent’s nourishment is reflected in their infants, that is educated people have different standard of living as compared to illiterate individuals.
Looking back to the introduction, one could also argue that parents are considered as architect of their child’s overall development. Therefore, it is their duty to put ideal behaviour and manner to their minds. Also, the axiom goes- if a child is thief, kill his mother. Therefore, it is clear that how importance is parents in moulding children’s life.
Hence based on arguments above, we can conclude that parents not only nurture their child but also provide them right guidance towards their bright future. Therefore, I believe that parents should be wholly responsible for actions and future of their children.
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21111111111 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92297319365 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596296296296 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0539266102 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126235748386 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488002728641 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065081200828 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812053175027 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365694595587 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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