Large shopping malls are replacing small local shops in cities. In your own experience is it a positive development?
Surely there has been in history where the lives of people changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals development of large shopping malls has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. People have always to analyse and explain its impact on small shops in local areas. Regarding this, I would say it is probably not a positive development.
One compelling argument in favor of my stance has to do with the fact that large shopping malls has indirectly snatched away the bread and butter of local shopkeepers. This is because shopping malls and buildings provides costumers with myriad products under one roof. As a result, people prefer large malls for shopping as it is time efficient. But, this ultimately effect small shopkeepers, who have a small turnover businesses.
Looking back at the introduction one could also argue that these malls provides buyers a wide option to buy different branded products. Due to this, individual's get greedy and buy the things that are not even for their need. Therefore, this result in disturbance in the financial budget of a common family.
Hence, based on arguments above, we can conclude development of large shopping malls not only affect local vendors monthly sale but also has a vast effect on individual's financial budget significantly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20183486239 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82388540139 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623853211009 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1227836282 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309695906063 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10551366891 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836195293519 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180570169471 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956862255529 0.0609392437508 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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