The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people has changed more dramatically. A quick reflection typical day reveals that internet has been of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people have always intrigued to analyze and explain the effects of this online surfing on individual's life. Regarding this, I believe that it is happening mainly due to easy accessing of online adult sites by teenagers and hackers easy access to different websites and it can be solved by adopting the measures mentioned in the essay.
there are several reasons for problems related to use of internet. First of all, teenagers are easily accessed to different adults sites which are not good for their psychological health. they can easily prove them to be adults, and with the one click of button, they are getting used to sexually explicit materials that is not suitable as per age. Another reason is that, website makers are not providing the users with certified security measures which make the page prone to different hackers. cyber crime is increasing day by day, as hackers have found a key to all locker related to hacking.
However, there are various steps that we could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, adult sites should have stringent identification processes in order for an individual to prove them as an adult. Secondly, government should tight their legislation process and should made to apply legit action against accused in cyber crime. A third option would be that, cyber security agency should have day to day analysis of cyber related crimes and should update their resources.
Hence, based on the arguments above, I want to stress that internet related problems are rising due to inappropriate content and security loopholes. Nonetheless, we could certianly implement a range of measures mentioned in this essay to mitigate them in a timely manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 311.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16077170418 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64847168189 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585209003215 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9516200216 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.25397266985 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0688645142387 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0272342954364 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046399513891 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461521698108 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312606216274 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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