In today’s world, different government, and international organization are confronting many problems. What is the most pressing problem among them?
We have an accelerated growth rate and are growing in all spheres be it economic, political or social. While this growth might be good for the world we are destroying everything in our way to achieve it. The world is upsurging with a lot of problems and the biggest among them is the destruction of natural resources. In this essay, we discuss the problem and the solution to overcoming it in detail.
The major cause of the destruction of natural resources is the pollution caused by us. There are many sources of pollution which are leading to destruction and extinction of resources. The dominant one among them is the pollution caused by industries. They are not only annihilating the ecology but also are making people suffer from a range of diseases.
We are using the deficient natural resources at such a progressive rate that there will be no resources left for the future generations to come. We can’t reproduce the natural resources so the only step we can take is to save them as much as we can. We have to use the steps which are accessible and practical rather than going for the complicated ones.
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In today’s world, different government and international organization are confronting many problems
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PTE Sample essay-In today’s world, different government, and international organization are confronting many problems. What is the most pressing problem among them?
We have an accelerated growth rate and are growing in all spheres be it economic, political or social. While this growth might be good for the world we are destroying everything in our way to achieve it. The world is upsurging with a lot of problems and the biggest among them is the destruction of natural resources. In this essay, we discuss the problem and the solution to overcoming it in detail.
The major cause of the destruction of natural resources is the pollution caused by us. There are many sources of pollution which are leading to destruction and extinction of resources. The dominant one among them is the pollution caused by industries. They are not only annihilating the ecology but also are making people suffer from a range of diseases.
We are using the deficient natural resources at such a progressive rate that there will be no resources left for the future generations to come. We can’t reproduce the natural resources so the only step we can take is to save them as much as we can. We have to use the steps which are accessible and practical rather than going for the complicated ones.
The government has to introduce some compelling rules and regulations to avoid wastage of resources and bring out some eco-friendly measures. The international organizations can raise funds and also acquaint people be introducing an awareness program to educate people the importance of natural resources and a guide to save them.
To conclude, this is a major concern as it serves as roots for other concerning issues for the world but it can be alleviated if it is attended with an appropriate approach and dealt with global integrity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 40.0 10.5418719212 379% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 8.36945812808 275% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 20.9802955665 219% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 31.9359605911 197% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 5.75862068966 417% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2748.0 1207.87684729 228% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 541.0 242.827586207 223% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07948243993 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 3.92707691288 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97527477225 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.31977818854 0.580463131201 55% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 874.8 379.143842365 231% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 4.6157635468 282% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 12.6551724138 213% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2862426774 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.777777778 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.037037037 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14814814815 7.25397266985 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.12807881773 291% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 2.75862068966 471% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276956714275 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725442962949 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121004012553 0.071462118173 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177360008288 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.252666819449 0.0609392437508 415% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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